'lonely islands' italic font looks good... archer looks like crap! please swap for something els... try lowercase italic garamond or didot
i break for 'up all night' spread! brilliant concept... type needs a little tweaking though... i feel like there needs to be more of a relationship between placement of letter forms and the edge of the image... play some more
amazing photographs!
ReplyDelete'lonely islands' italic font looks good... archer looks like crap! please swap for something els... try lowercase italic garamond or didot
i break for 'up all night' spread! brilliant concept... type needs a little tweaking though... i feel like there needs to be more of a relationship between placement of letter forms and the edge of the image... play some more
really great job so far!
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sorry it's Olga
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